Hi Jordarn I really like your presentation of this reading log. Your plot summary is a good start but it still needs a little more detail about what adventure is about. It was great to see you giving a character description but it needs to be about the person for example what words would you use to describe Percy? Your personal response needed to be more about making connections to the book, text to text, text to self and text to the world. I would expect to see this in your next reading log.
Hi Jordarn I really like your presentation of this reading log. Your plot summary is a good start but it still needs a little more detail about what adventure is about. It was great to see you giving a character description but it needs to be about the person for example what words would you use to describe Percy? Your personal response needed to be more about making connections to the book, text to text, text to self and text to the world. I would expect to see this in your next reading log.